707095323 发表于 2011-12-20 13:17 只看TA 102楼 |
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真的很好,特别是人物细节描写,我恍惚之间觉得是在看言情小说(就人物描写来说)特别是人物心理描写,比如那一段主角在为了母亲之事烦恼时望着水面之时。以水波的荡漾衬托出主角心里的纠结与不知所措。 其他乱文,都是一上来大鸡巴儿子啊,什么什么的就开时ML了,那些我一看到就觉得虚假。这篇就不同,通过很多细节以小见大。真的很不错,在此谢谢了。 |
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kaka123a 发表于 2011-12-20 13:34 只看TA 103楼 |
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kaka123a 发表于 2011-12-20 13:35 只看TA 104楼 |
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kaka123a 发表于 2011-12-20 13:35 只看TA 105楼 |
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kaka123a 发表于 2011-12-20 13:35 只看TA 106楼 |
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kaka123a 发表于 2011-12-20 13:36 只看TA 107楼 |
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l394360602 发表于 2011-12-20 19:05 只看TA 109楼 |
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现在大家的回复都好认真啊。评价这么高,我也看看,的确是情节与角色的搭配要重于肉戏啊。现在的好文章很多都空洞乏味啊。感谢楼主的文章,期待新作! |
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